26 April, 2012

Hiya peeps it's Charlotte here on my first blog. Today I'm going to be writing the first chapter of my story called Broken  Dreams so here it is.

Chapter one:

The love for a loved one can control a mind, a body, a soul, even a dignity. But not all people lose the will to live over love that is so powerful. Though that is not the case for this love story, oh no. They do lose the power to live, oh yes. It all starts with a couple from Cambridge going by the name Lizzy and Adam. Oh how they loved each other. Big is too little of a word of how much they cherished each other. In a small flat on an empty street they lived on one bed, a stove, a toilet and a sink which didn't always release clean water let alone water at all. You may think that they are scanky and poor but to them they are normal. No one and nothing can get in the way of this relationship.

Adam, who works for a company that is nearly going bust themselves, got paid extra for the countless amount of hours that he had put into work which he shouldn't have been doing. Adam could just about manage to afford to take Lizzy to a two star hotel to have a middle classed dinner which is exactly what he did. Whilst the waiter was getting the desserts ready Adam got on one knee and proposed to Lizzy who exploded into a river of happy tears. Adam presented her with a plastic ring which he bought from a three year old girl. I didn't tell you about the ring until now because I didn't want to ruin the surprise. I'm sure it was more of a surprise for Lizzy than it was for you though. But did Lizzy say yes to him I hear you question. Of course she did! With such a bond between each other how could she say no.

Read the next chapter on my next blog to find out more.    See you later folks!   

9 comments:

  1. thats good :)

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  2. I thought this was excellent :)

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  3. really good charlotte!! :)

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  4. Thanks guys for my awesome comments and hope you'll read next blog/chapter

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  5. Brilliant start to the story. Can't wait to read the next part! When will that be??? :-)

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  6. I cant say anything really as it is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good x When is the next chapter gonna be out ? I cant wait x

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  7. i agree with sidony

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  8. i'm doing the next chapter now thanks for all of your comments

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